Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Superman - 55 words fiction

"Guess what!  I am superman!" He said
"Really??" She asked
"Yeah"
"Screw you. Why did you come? "
"So many questions otherwise"
"Can you give me a hug? "
"Sure"
They reached the ground together, embracing each other. Free fall from the 35th floor  can be fatal.
She slipped and he jumped after. Friendship till the end.
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 27, 2013 at 1:53 AM

    Wow! I loved the last line. Friendship is so precious and rarely we get to see across such strong bonding till the end these days. Beautiful!

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    1. RohanMarch 27, 2013 at 8:20 AM

      Thanx a lot Dreamygal! What you said is true about friendship, I wanted to catch that essence in it. . Glad you got it. .

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  2. NishaMarch 27, 2013 at 2:22 AM

    I would have liked their friendship more if they had convinced each other not to jump. Hmmm!!

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    1. RohanMarch 27, 2013 at 8:23 AM

      The girl slipped and fell down and her friend jumped right after her. . I am not really used to the 55 words, cant express freely. .

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    2. Dr Roshan RadhakrishnanMarch 27, 2013 at 12:13 PM

      I got that.. and I have to say its a really good one..

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    3. RohanMarch 28, 2013 at 7:14 AM

      Thanz Doc!! :)

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  3. Lazy PineappleMarch 27, 2013 at 7:06 AM

    Even though the bonds of friendship were strong..the end is so sad...

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    1. RohanMarch 27, 2013 at 8:25 AM

      Some friendships are like that, it goes on beautifully but gets an abrupt and sad ending. .

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  4. Ritika TiwariMarch 30, 2013 at 5:09 AM

    Okay, it took me a while to get it but I finally got it :P :P
    That was amazing ! I am so bad at this 55 words thing :|

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    1. RohanMarch 31, 2013 at 10:16 AM

      Thanx Ritika. . Even I thought I couldn't do it but its fun and you should try it. .

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