"Guess what! I am superman!" He said
"Really??" She asked
"Yeah"
"Screw you. Why did you come? "
"So many questions otherwise"
"Can you give me a hug? "
"Sure"
They reached the ground together, embracing each other. Free fall from the 35th floor can be fatal.
She slipped and he jumped after. Friendship till the end.
Wow! I loved the last line. Friendship is so precious and rarely we get to see across such strong bonding till the end these days. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanx a lot Dreamygal! What you said is true about friendship, I wanted to catch that essence in it. . Glad you got it. .
DeleteI would have liked their friendship more if they had convinced each other not to jump. Hmmm!!
ReplyDeleteThe girl slipped and fell down and her friend jumped right after her. . I am not really used to the 55 words, cant express freely. .
DeleteI got that.. and I have to say its a really good one..
DeleteThanz Doc!! :)
DeleteEven though the bonds of friendship were strong..the end is so sad...
ReplyDeleteSome friendships are like that, it goes on beautifully but gets an abrupt and sad ending. .
DeleteOkay, it took me a while to get it but I finally got it :P :P
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing ! I am so bad at this 55 words thing :|
Thanx Ritika. . Even I thought I couldn't do it but its fun and you should try it. .
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