Sunday, February 2, 2014
Of Half baked dreams - 55 words fiction
The old man placed the dough in the oven. He set the temperature. The girl looked on. After a while she asked if it was ready. He took it out and showed the half baked cake. Dreams are like this only he said. She thought of her half baked dreams with tears in her eyes.
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he might have half-baked it. But you nailed it! :) and y 55 words??
ReplyDeleteThanks Swetha! :)
Delete55 words because I was actually lazy to write more. . :P
I am a bit depressed now!
ReplyDeleteI was when I wrote it down. . We all have half baked dreams don't we?
DeleteAwesome post dude. But must I say, what a cruel thing for an old man to do.
ReplyDeleteBlogrolling you.
Updated mine. Do drop by.
Cheers
CRD
Life is cruel and that's what the old man wanted to tell her. .
DeleteWill go through yours!
That is what timers are for :) You stare at the seconds depleting and wait for the dreams to swell
ReplyDeleteLol!! :P Old man didn't really believe in timers!
Deletebeautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteThanx Purple Assassin! :)
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