Sunday, February 2, 2014

Of Half baked dreams - 55 words fiction

The old man placed the dough in the oven. He set the temperature. The girl looked on. After a while she asked if it was ready. He took it out and showed the half baked cake. Dreams are like this only he said. She thought of her half baked dreams with tears in her eyes.

10 comments:

  1. he might have half-baked it. But you nailed it! :) and y 55 words??

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    1. Thanks Swetha! :)
      55 words because I was actually lazy to write more. . :P

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    1. I was when I wrote it down. . We all have half baked dreams don't we?

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  3. Awesome post dude. But must I say, what a cruel thing for an old man to do.

    Blogrolling you.

    Updated mine. Do drop by.

    Cheers
    CRD

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    1. Life is cruel and that's what the old man wanted to tell her. .
      Will go through yours!

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  4. That is what timers are for :) You stare at the seconds depleting and wait for the dreams to swell

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    1. Lol!! :P Old man didn't really believe in timers!

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